Miscommunication

As you can see in this page, I’m playing around with different highlighting methods.  Still haven’t come up with one that I like yet, that feels right.  There are a few more that I’m going to try and I’m also going to try out different software.  This page is a bit wordy, and manipulating the word bubbles was a pain in the ass.  I need to work on saying more with fewer words.  I also think there probably should have been some transition panel between the commander and the lieutenant being on screen. 

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